Anna Ebaugh
Mrs. Wilson
British Literature B
May 8, 2013
The Neoclassical
Period was the period of the “Haves” and the “Have-Nots”, also known as the
wealthy English and the poor Irish. In the Neoclassical Period satire is the
main literary device used in this period by the authors and poets. In the
pamphlet, “A Modest Proposal” by Jonathon Swift, he uses ethos, pathos, and
logos to express his use of juvenalian satire and his view on the economic
downfall in Ireland.
The use of ethos
in this piece, aid in the credibility that the author is trying to establish
about the Irish economy. Since Jonathon Swift is trying to persuade the reader
to make a change in the Irish economy, he uses ethical appeal to increase
credibility in the point he is trying to make. Swift talks about children who
are being used as food and he says, “I have been assured by a very knowing
American of my acquaintance in London, that a young healthy child well nursed,
is, at a year old, a most delicious nourishing and wholesome food…” (Swift 584). The fact that this quote was “a
very knowing American” creates credibility to what he is saying; it makes the
reader believe that it is true. This quote relates to the juvenalian satire
because it is bitter since they are talking about eating the children and it is
persuading the reader into believing the Irish economy is bad because Swift
creates “credibility” in what he is saying. Swift wraps up his piece and
explains his real purpose in writing this piece, he says, “I profess, in the
sincerity of my heart, that I have not the least personal interest in
endeavoring to promote this necessary work, having no other motive than the
public good on my country…” (Swift 589). Swift creates credibility in this
quote because he says “I profess, in the sincerity of my heart” and that shows
how strongly he feels about the Irish economy and it shows that he really does
not want people to eat the children, he just wants to help his country. The
word choice assures the reader that he is only worried about the Irish economy
and it makes the reader realize how strongly he feels about the situation. Ethical
appeal creates believability so the reader can believe what he is proposing and
it makes the reader want to aid in supporting the economy. Not only is ethos used throughout the piece to create credibility, pathos is also used to make the reader feel sympathetic for the Irish economy.
Pathos is used in
“A Modest Proposal” to draw the reader in and make them feel deep sorrow for
the Irish. The author is trying to persuade the reader to help make a change to
the Irish economy and by doing that, he uses emotional appeal to make the
reader sympathetic to the situation. Jonathon swift discusses what he sees when
he walks the streets of Ireland, he says, “it is a melancholy object to those,
who walk through this great town, or travel in the country, when they see the
streets, the roads and cabin-doors crowded with beggars of the female sex,
followed by three, four, or six children, all in rags, and importuning every
passenger for an alms” (Swift 582). This quote shows the reader what the
streets of Ireland look like and it shows the life of a poor Irish family. The
way that quote is written and the word choice that is in it, really makes the
reader feel sympathetic for the women on the streets with their children. This
quote pulls the reader into the direction to want to make a change in Ireland. In
order to make a change in Ireland, Swift comes up with a proposal and he claims
there are many advantages to this proposal, he says, “there is likewise another
great advantage in my scheme, that it will prevent those voluntary abortions, and
that horrid practice of women murdering their bastard children…” (Swift 584).
The use of the words “horrid”, “murdering”, and “bastard” really puts emphasis
on the way Swift feels about abortion and it draws the reader to believe that
abortion is in fact murderous. The fact that these two quotes persuade the
reader into feeling sympathetic for the Irish and makes us have an urge to help
the Irish economy; demonstrates that this story is satirical because Swift is
wanting a change and he is reaching out to the reader by using emotional
appeal. The use of pathos makes the reader feel sympathetic and want to make a change; logos is also used to make the reader want to make a change but that is achieved by the use of statistics and calculations.
Jonathon
Swift’s use of logos uses statistical facts to support Swift’s desire to
help the Irish economy. “A Modest Proposal” is told by an economic planner and
because of that, Swift uses statistics and numbers that may or may not be true,
to make his story persuade someone to contribute in helping out the struggling
Irish economy. Swift creates some numbers and calculations to calculate the
number of children who are born into a poor family, he says, “The number of
souls in this kingdom being usually reckoned one million and a half, of these I
calculate there may be about two hundred thousand couple whose wives are
breeders; from which number I subtract thirty thousand couple, who are able to
maintain their own children, but this being granted, there will remain a
hundred and seventy thousand breeders. I again subtract fifty thousand for
those women who miscarry, or whose children die by accident, or disease within
the year. There only remain a hundred and twenty thousand children of poor
parents annually born” (Swift 584). The fact that this quote uses numbers and
“facts” makes the reader believe what he is concluding. He uses these
calculations to support his position on the poor economy and since he is using
numbers, it makes the piece more persuasive because people are always persuaded
when there is numbers involved. Swift resolves the low economy problem by
saying that the rich can eat the poor children so the streets are not
overcrowded and the Irish economy gets better. He uses the way of eating the
children as a resolution because this is his last resort to get people’s
attention about the trembling Irish economy. He talks about the children for
food and he says, “I do therefore humbly offer it to the public consideration,
that of the hundred and twenty thousand children, already computed, twenty
thousand may be reserved for breed, whereof only one fourth part to the males;
which is more than we allow to sheep, black cattle, or swine…” (Swift 584).
This quote uses numbers which backs up his claim. This quote is very
exaggerated and satirical because Swift doesn’t actually want to eat the
children, he just wants to create a call to action and have someone help out
the Irish economy. The fact that the children are being compared to animals
shows that the children lack innocence in the eyes of the citizens. The
calculations and numbers that is used in this pamphlet make the piece more
persuasive and makes people want to make a change and it aids in the appearance
of the poor economy.
In the pamphlet,
“A Modest Proposal” by Jonathon Swift, he uses ethos, pathos, and logos to
express his use of juvenalian satire and his view on the economic downfall in
Ireland. Ethos creates credibility which makes the reader believe what Jonathon
Swift is saying and then therefore believe in what he is saying about the Irish
economy. Swift uses pathos by using certain word choices that make the reader
feel emotional and grab their attention about the Irish poor and their economy.
The use of logos creates calculations and “facts” which help persuade the
reader into believing what Swift is portraying is true. People believe numbers
and calculations which would make the readers believe Swift. The use of these three appeals grab the reader's attention to make them want to make a change.
The use of ethos in this piece, aid in the credibility that the author is trying to establish about the Irish economy. Since Jonathon Swift is trying to persuade the reader to make a change in the Irish economy, he uses ethical appeal to increase credibility in the point he is trying to make---- this is repetitive
ReplyDeleteThe numbers and facts are logos as well
People may not know what the "haves" and "have-nots" are, so you may need to define these or further explain.
believability-- is this a word?
Make sure you aren't too repetitive.
First paragraph talked about ethical and you randomly threw a logos in there at the end.
use of logos creates statistical facts -- instead of "creates" say "uses"
"This quote shows the reader what the streets of Ireland look like and it shows the life of a poor Irish family. The way that quote is written and the word choice that is in it, really makes the reader feel sympathetic for the women on the streets with their children" --- HOW?
In the conclusion, maybe try rephrasing the thesis instead of stating it exactly word for word.
"Ethos creates credibility which makes the reader believe what Jonathon Swift is saying and then therefore believe in what he is saying about the Irish economy" -- you repeat yourself here
Jonathon Swift wants the people of Ireland to make a change, not only grab their attention.
Introduction:
ReplyDelete-I liked your intro, the historical background was relevant and important but I do believe you can try rewriting your thesis statement to create more of a flow in your writing.
-You also should include a transitional phrase to move from your first paragraph to the next.
Body Paragraphs:
-your first sentence to the next paragraph is a little repetitive although the point you are trying to make is well established
Conclusion:
-Very good, your conclusion wrapped up the paper very well although you are repetitive in the second line of your conclusion.
-I feel as though your missing just one last sentence on your conclusion to wrap up the things you said before it. (just a hunch worth mentioning)